Thursday, November 20, 2008

thoughts an feelings upon listening to the studio version of I'm you captain/closer to home

upon reflection
and ultimate self-reflection
there remains a remnant of dejection

was it the awareness that emergent
of the healing which needs to be resurgent
in a whorl grown all insurgent?

or was it a feeling-with heart
of that which was back nearer to our soul's start
when the innocence was our mostliestly played part?

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